yellow Jasmine

[machinery]

Rare yellow blossom
confirms its face as petals
flutter in the breeze.

She?s not before me,
but i envision her face
enveloped in bangs.

i never want to open my eyes.

You say sunflowers
seem sinister. Vast
fields of guffawing.

That yellow isn?t
my yellow. Nor are those fields
my lowly landscape.

i never want to wake up.

Miles cannot deter
dreams, but i know you?ll never
thrive in my garden.

<font color="#00FF00" size="1">[ May 01, 2008 11:19 AM: Message edited by: machinery ]</font>

[Hannibal]

This one... was powerful.

Moved almost to a point of tears (honestly).

I REALLY liked it.
I wish I could tell you things to make this one better, but I cannot.

This one - I felt. I felt the words, I felt the ideas, I felt it. It melted me like butter (as weird as that sounds)